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Haiku V

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winter winds whisper
melodies as they caress
our fragile bodies.
Personification.

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This is quite a lovely poem.

It has an excellent concept, and it's very well fit to the small format. The wording is well-done, and provides a nice full scene, and emotion at the same time. The ideas even fit well within the lines, by which I mean the breaks are appropriate, set format or not. It truly is a fine piece. Excellent job! 5/5